"Satana" (technical stuff & ideas)

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#1 Sat, 1997-04-26 09:41
Ben Opie
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"Satana" (technical stuff & ideas)

I've been considering "Satana" from the recently discovered Ra scores. I'm very interested in playing this mysterious work, but the score is somewhat fragmentary. Most notably, the score lacks chord progressions for most of the work. Here are some observations and ideas I've made regarding this work.

First of all, tempo: if this is a companion to "Saturn," a diptych if you will, then I suspect the tempo is similar. Medium-to-fast speed is my guess.

I get the feeling that this is a darker work than "Saturn," which I think is upbeat in mood.

Form: it's a standard AABA form with a two measure introduction. Nothing unusual there.

Harmony/chords: here's where the (educated) guessing starts. The relatively straight-ahead bop works that Ra wrote around this time have an advanced harmonic language. "Brainville," "New Horizons," and "Saturn" are all evidence of this. My point being, it is reasonable to step away from standard major, minor, and seventh chords in harmonizing such a piece. All signs indicate the work resolves on F Major, but there's a lot of altered tones along the way.

The notes C (treble) and E (bass) in measure one of the A section suggest a number of possible chords, among them: C Maj, A min, E min flat 6, E Aug. My preference is for the E Aug, it has a nicely ambiguous quality. The following measure suggests a C7 flat 9 to me. Anyway, here's my working chord progression based on the materials given. Starting with the first measure of the verse:

One measure of E Aug, one measure of C7 flat 9, one measure of E Aug, one measure of C7 flat 9, one measure of E Aug, one measure of F min7, one measure of C7 sharp 9, one measure of F Maj7. Bridge chords are given.

I think it's functional. I may add a chord or two for soloing changes, but I think the above changes work with the materials given.

I hope those of you who can will take the time to run through this and offer your ideas. I am willing to consider any alternatives you suggest.

Ben